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Hasmukh Amathalal
(9/25/2009 11:15:00 PM) |
Oh load-bearers of humanity
I wonder how you carry the load so awesome
But when I gasp for strength
I take refuge in your strength
I take refuge in you! it is inner strength and storng desire to stand against..makes us to take refuge and face... lovley poem with strong message....10
read mine...message...welcome.... blood all over.bi tter words
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Sherri Coulter
(9/17/2009 11:24:00 PM) |
...although the load being weary, I trudge, muddle the puddle, and I seem to come out feeling lighter than air, and knowing how much I am loved.10/10
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Noel Horlanda
(8/8/2009 2:17:00 AM) |
You must have gotten a lot of strength and energy from the bearers of humanity. Very awesome indeed. Great lines, well thought, deep in meaning in short excellent. A thousand applause to the writer.
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Bob Blackwell
(8/4/2009 10:32:00 AM) |
Great poem, I sometimes wonder how they bear the load, when the virus of evil spreads so easlily. 10++
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Uchenna Nnodum
(8/1/2009 2:29:00 PM) |
nice poem.in the life we need someone or something to hang on to in time of need and despair.10+
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Louis Rams
(7/27/2009 6:43:00 PM) |
the last three lines to me say it all
but when i gasp for strength
i take refuge in your strength
i take refuge in you.
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Ramesh T A
(7/25/2009 8:01:00 AM) |
How humanity is facing reality of Kali Yuga is well expressed in the poem. Nice to read!
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