Jeff Hobbs

Rookie - 12 Points (6 September,1962 / Sydney, Australia)

Oh Paris - Poem by Jeff Hobbs

Ah, to be in Paris in the rain
The tower dripping wet
The pavement like moist sheets
Beneath our bodies
The taste of sweets on our misty breath
The sounds of music hidden under
Flashes of lightning and the roar of
A thunderous climax
Ah, to be in Paris
In the rain

(25 July 2006)


Comments about Oh Paris by Jeff Hobbs

  • Rookie Red Blooded Black Hearted (8/2/2006 7:22:00 PM)

    That was a great poem, great work.
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  • Rookie Padraic O' Reilly (7/24/2006 7:17:00 PM)

    Really sensory, makes me wish I was in Paris. This is a great piece of writing. Thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 24, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 18, 2010


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