Oh Paris Poem by Jeff Hobbs

Oh Paris

Rating: 5.0


Ah, to be in Paris in the rain
The tower dripping wet
The pavement like moist sheets
Beneath our bodies
The taste of sweets on our misty breath
The sounds of music hidden under
Flashes of lightning and the roar of
A thunderous climax
Ah, to be in Paris
In the rain

(25 July 2006)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Wow! So lovely! It is as if Paris just rose before my eyes. Loved it, dear poet.

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 02 August 2006

That was a great poem, great work. Rissa

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Padraic O' Reilly 24 July 2006

Really sensory, makes me wish I was in Paris. This is a great piece of writing. Thanks.

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Jeff Hobbs

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