(6 September,1962 / Sydney, Australia)

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Oh Paris

Ah, to be in Paris in the rain
The tower dripping wet
The pavement like moist sheets
Beneath our bodies
The taste of sweets on our misty breath
The sounds of music hidden under
Flashes of lightning and the roar of
A thunderous climax
Ah, to be in Paris
In the rain

(25 July 2006)

Submitted: Monday, July 24, 2006
Edited: Wednesday, August 18, 2010


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  • Red Blooded Black Hearted (8/2/2006 7:22:00 PM)

    That was a great poem, great work.
    Rissa

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  • Padraic O' Reilly (7/24/2006 7:17:00 PM)

    Really sensory, makes me wish I was in Paris. This is a great piece of writing. Thanks.

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