Oh So Bare Poem by Heather Burns

An umbrella to carry tears turn to ice. Beautiful search poem forming a sheath of protection. Beautiful poem on sharing.

I read this poem thrice. It is beautiful metaphorical write. I visualise two birdies, in love of course, providing each other comfort. protection and warmth in adversities.10

Its a lovely poem, forming a shield of protection in the adverse condition.

Very insightful with metaphors used to tell of protection in the adverse situation.......very well composed

Very insightful with metaphors used to tell of protection in the adverse situation.......very well composed

This beautiful poem made me a day dreamer. I recollected hardships of a tiring, dejecting and frustrating day followed by a cold night of December with tears in my eyes due to fears of a doubtful future. I recollected the memories of my eve sent by God to relieve all my tensions and we embraced each other I found myself completely protected and free of all worries of a doubtful future. Thank You God life without an eve and her love would have been a rigorous imprisonment. Thanks to the great poetess who shared this lovely poem that hit the heart and burst out like a balloon of colors and fragrance and I send this beauty of colors and fragrance to Heather Burns through my comments as a gratitude.

Initially felt helplessness but finally wonderment of hope wrapping arms around each other forming a shield of protection. so nice

Initially felt helplessness but finally wonderment of hope wrapping arms around each other forming a shield of protection. so nice

Warmth of the heart can melt even the coldest of tears. Souls are bared but still warm. Nice.

I love the idea of having an umbrella as a shield against tears, that when it turns to ice, becomes transparent to reveal innermost fears. You have a unique style of expressing complex ideas in such a powerful, and succinct way.