Dr subhendu kar

Rookie - 196 Points (Bhubaneswar, Orissa, India)

((((((((((((((((((Oh The Mirage)))))))))))))))) - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Tomorrow is never be yours or mine
does future ever be enticed upon?
time when fails to meet mirage
today is still truth by the mirror

horizon be beaconing far and far away
star yet dazzles by glow of heaven
passion eclectic razzles in grin
leaf sways in green by breeze of cornfield

day remembers the warmth of the sun
moments expires by hope of tomorrow
night bespeaks of beauty of the moon
dream bestirs by the hue of the blue

oh the glaze by the beauty of grace
blood flows across the veil of vein
as mirth drizzles in room of rain
would you come back to fold of embrace


Comments about ((((((((((((((((((Oh The Mirage)))))))))))))))) by Dr subhendu kar

  • Rookie - 29 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (1/6/2009 12:16:00 AM)

    May be this optical illusion, the mirage, be real one day! A nice poem....Well written. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 421 Points Ency Bearis (1/5/2009 11:30:00 PM)

    wonderful poem...nice to read... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,785 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/5/2009 9:50:00 PM)

    Well written. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Trade Martin (1/5/2009 11:59:00 AM)

    Interesting stuff doctor....! ! ! Regards, Trade. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie C T Heart (1/5/2009 8:23:00 AM)

    Awesome composition! Crafted with zeal of excellence from the fine and right choices of words: great repeatition, assonance and alliteration of words. Content wise your theme brings a beautiful message.10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Vidi Writes (1/5/2009 1:51:00 AM)

    Illusions are the derived solutions
    Far from reach, still delights our vision
    Sense of today and tomorrow, a caution
    Illusions are mirages of Hope.

    So much of meaning in these few lines...
    Dear poet.. where do you get resourse from? ? ?
    May be in the pursuit of that last line... : -)
    Very good read indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chelsea Brink (12/28/2008 11:22:00 PM)

    This is simply beautiful! There is so much energy and feeling within the lines of this poem! ! Spectacular. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (12/28/2008 8:15:00 PM)

    'day remembers the warmth of the sun
    moments expires by hope of tomorrow
    night bespeaks of beauty of the moon
    dream bestirs by the hue of the blue'
    Dr. Kar your poem always has that
    warmth exuding and here it just pours-
    i like the metaphors and the imagery
    A++and 10++as always
    anjali (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Marama Kelly (12/28/2008 3:40:00 PM)

    Thanks for inviting me to read your poem. I enjoyed what you have to portray and the message within of a world that seems so distant and yet is all part and parcel of life lived as it is today. You have expressed well the beauty we have around us. Hope you don't mind, but did a bit of an edit in your poem. Of course they are only suggestions, just thought of the rhythmn within and the flow.

    Tomorrow will never be yours or mine
    will a future ever be enticed upon?
    time will tell when it fails to meet the mirage
    for today is still the mirror of truth

    The horizon beacons far, far away
    A star yet dazzles by the glow of heaven
    passions eclectic razzles in grin
    green leaf sways of cornfield in breeze

    day remembers the warmth of the sun
    moments expire in hope of tomorrow
    night bespeaks the beauty of the moon
    dream bestirs in the hue of the blue

    oh the glaze by the beauty of grace
    blood flows within the veiled vein
    as mirth drizzles in room of rain
    would you come back to the fold of embrace

    Thanks again for the invite and many blessings to you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 74 Points Maia Padua (12/27/2008 11:14:00 PM)

    very inspiring...with beautiful concepts on reality...an awakening piece of some fantasies in thoughts...in human minds...
    hits my mind, soul and heart....touching, soulful....
    to embrace the beauty of reality and live with it....
    .great with amazingly chosen poetic words that projects beautiful images/ scenery
    .for me such kind of deep words are your trademarks...niche...10+++++ and a vote... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (12/26/2008 11:52:00 PM)

    Hi subhendu, Here the whole vital philosophy. It is amazingly beautifully expressed... A thin and supersensitive soul at you... 10x10...
    Tsira (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (12/26/2008 5:38:00 PM)

    This is beautiful Subhendu, with a profound message. The first line says it all. Tomorrow belongs to no one, today is the only reality. All else is a mirage, a dream from which reality is waking. You poem is rich with stunning images - 'mirth drizzles in room of rain', 'passion eclectic razzles in grin'. A splendid poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 26, 2008



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