Old Age Poem by Rini Shibu

Old Age

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Buds burst forth from the trees in spring
Leaves reappear once again
Withstand winter when cold dooms the leaves.
Eagle emerge from  hibernation
Regains strength and pursues it's prey
They never lose hope when feathers are weak.
The conditions change in life
Hair turns gray and skin wrinkles
Allow your inner beauty to shine
Regain the power and ability.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kishore Kumar Das 14 June 2017

Our body may be ageing.....but mind can't age...this philosophy reflected in your nice poem..

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Robert Murray Smith 09 June 2018

An inspiring write. ++10

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 25 September 2017

The conditions change in life Hair turns gray and skin wrinkles Allow your inner beauty to shine Regain the power and ability. It encouraged to keep power in old age.it is a wonderful and a very courageous poem.so thank a lot Riding jerry

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Rini Shibu 25 September 2017

Thanks sounds, glad that you liked it

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Mark Otieno 21 August 2017

wow! its beautiful i like it!

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Rini Shibu 21 August 2017

Thank you so much Mark for reading this poem

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Akhtar Jawad 09 August 2017

Hair turns gray and skin wrinkles Allow your inner beauty to shine Regain the power and ability............................great encouraging thought, a beautiful poem.

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Rini Shibu 10 August 2017

Thanks for your kind words Akhtar

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Saadat Tahir 22 June 2017

The conditions changes in life Hair turns gray and skin wrinkles Allow your inner beauty to shine well said..a snap shot that captures the relentless montage... nice...more in inmail.... liked

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Rini Shibu 23 June 2017

Thank you so much sat... Rini

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