hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 18,264 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Old Age Time


You have lost the stage of supremacy
So only alternate left is intimacy
You don’t want to loose privacy
Hence tune on suitable frequency

It gets deeps with passing of an age
You may feel confined to cage
You are written off as spent force
Only few may love and others curse

You need strong partner
Who can understand you as gardener?
Gardener may also need support
As it may depend more on good rapport

You know more of your inability
That has already proved as bad quality
You are not wanted by any of the section
It all depends only on your action

You know your limits and hence nurturing
Render the advices and almost tutoring
You may need isolation and safe stay
Not wrong people may be preferred but kept away

It is more of compulsion than necessity
As it has grown out of your inability
It has come to you from sheer time passage
One must think carefully about it and manage

Submitted: Wednesday, August 31, 2011
Edited: Wednesday, August 31, 2011
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  • Gold Star - 18,264 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/31/2011 3:12:00 AM)

    It is more of compulsion than necessity
    As it has grown out of your inability
    It has come to you from sheer time passage
    One must think carefully about it and manage (Report) Reply

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