Jesus James Llorico


Old Woman - Poem by Jesus James Llorico

My heart is filled with strain and sympathy
This picture that I never want to see
A loose feeling borne out of misery
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  • Jesus James Llorico (10/19/2016 10:57:00 PM)

    Thanks...
    Thank you Ms Bharati Nayak for an inspiring
    comment.
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  • Bharati Nayak (10/19/2016 9:01:00 PM)


    It's not the load on her back that I see
    But a life of pain and adversity
    The real truth that it can only be
    A burden of poverty she carry
    - - - - - - - - - -A kind and sympathetic soul can understand the pains and sufferings of another human being.
    A very beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.
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  • Tapan M. Saren (3/6/2016 9:32:00 AM)


    Nice poem.. I invite you to read my poems (Report) Reply

  • Niken Kusuma Wardani (12/25/2015 11:40:00 PM)


    Beautiful poem, I can picture the woman through yr words. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (10/21/2015 9:55:00 PM)


    It's not the load on her back that I see
    But a life of pain and adversity
    The real truth that it can only be
    A burden of poverty she carry

    As to our life's daily and constant strife
    To this old woman born of tragedy
    And who have no power to enjoy life
    To my God I ask why this mystery?

    Verily, a very compassionate heart you possess
    and I think God has designed such miseries as a trial
    to test the love and compassion of humans........10
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  • (10/6/2013 5:20:00 AM)


    Well written. I could visualize the old woman as I read the poem. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (6/18/2013 10:39:00 PM)


    a sad story about a poor old tattered woman. distinct imagery. good write (Report) Reply

  • Jesus James Llorico (4/11/2013 8:49:00 PM)


    thanks Mr. Mistra, I tried to comment on your poems, but there is a problem with my computer every time I comment. I'll resolve this issue as soon as possible. cheers. (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (4/4/2013 5:05:00 AM)


    good one. thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment.
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