Jesus James Llorico


Old Woman - Poem by Jesus James Llorico

My heart is filled with strain and sympathy
This picture that I never want to see
A loose feeling borne out of misery
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Comments about Old Woman by Jesus James Llorico

  • Rookie - 0 Points Geetima Baruah Sarma (10/6/2013 5:20:00 AM)

    Well written. I could visualize the old woman as I read the poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,846 Points Heather Wilkins (6/18/2013 10:39:00 PM)

    a sad story about a poor old tattered woman. distinct imagery. good write (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,313 Points Jesus James Llorico (4/11/2013 8:49:00 PM)

    thanks Mr. Mistra, I tried to comment on your poems, but there is a problem with my computer every time I comment. I'll resolve this issue as soon as possible. cheers. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 34,032 Points Gajanan Mishra (4/4/2013 5:05:00 AM)

    good one. thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply








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