Jesus James Llorico

Old Woman - Poem by Jesus James Llorico

My heart is filled with strain and sympathy
This picture that I never want to see
A loose feeling borne out of misery
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Comments about Old Woman by Jesus James Llorico

  • Gold Star - 26,303 Points Abdulrazak Aralimatti (10/21/2015 9:55:00 PM)

    It's not the load on her back that I see
    But a life of pain and adversity
    The real truth that it can only be
    A burden of poverty she carry

    As to our life's daily and constant strife
    To this old woman born of tragedy
    And who have no power to enjoy life
    To my God I ask why this mystery?

    Verily, a very compassionate heart you possess
    and I think God has designed such miseries as a trial
    to test the love and compassion of humans........10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Geetima Baruah Sarma (10/6/2013 5:20:00 AM)

    Well written. I could visualize the old woman as I read the poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (6/18/2013 10:39:00 PM)

    a sad story about a poor old tattered woman. distinct imagery. good write (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,592 Points Jesus James Llorico (4/11/2013 8:49:00 PM)

    thanks Mr. Mistra, I tried to comment on your poems, but there is a problem with my computer every time I comment. I'll resolve this issue as soon as possible. cheers. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 69,573 Points Gajanan Mishra (4/4/2013 5:05:00 AM)

    good one. thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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