~ Olololouuud! ! ! ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Olololouuud! ! ! ~

Rating: 5.0


~ OLoLoLouuud! ! ! ~

Ms. Nivedita
UK
18 March 18,2012

Am I: ~

A form without a from?

OR

A from without form?

OR

Mosaic?

OR

None?

Then what I'm?

by Jove: ~
I'm unmistakably
Weeny Wisdom
Unmanifested yet.

Without queue quandary
Solicit ev'ry plausive punditry.

Till then in Uranus
Join Uzume
In chorus
OLoLoLouuud! ! !

Pliss! ! !

===
Glossary: With humility I'm giving what I tried to express:

Uzume: The Japanese Goddess of cheerfulness &c.
~~~
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joub Kahuria 26 March 2012

well am still reading yo poems.....words are powerful

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Contemplative Poem As Poet originates from India...she infused in short Vedantic thoughts in this short poetry It is an ever enigma unanswered yet As poet couldn't throw any light of this puzzle she took the path of '...Till then in Uranus/Join Uzume/In chorus/ OLoLoLouuud! ! ! This finish is apt and eventual..10++

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Amitabha Bagchi 09 April 2012

Very much intriguing poem...well conceived and worded agree with earlier commentator Sri Desai...thanks for sharing 10++

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Rishit Desai 03 April 2012

What a thought! ! Great work.

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Bachha Chakravorty 01 April 2012

Contemplative Poem served in lighter/laughter canvas... Primordial Enigma...enjoyed it lot...a perfect 10 thanks for sharing

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Unwritten Soul 27 March 2012

when i read 'uzume i was saying what was that...glad u gave me in your rich glossary..i like it... you are the person who i can say a living dictionary..your vocab across countries and your fluent so smothering! Olololouuuuuuuuuud hahaha_Unwritten soul

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