Olympus Poem by Ebi Robert

Olympus

Rating: 5.0


Olympus.
Mountain of Greece.
Fountain of food where the gods feeds.
And climbing so tough as peace.

Olympus.
Mountain of dreams.
That sees far beyond dreams.
Dream beyond dream of dreams.
Dust of the gods.
Sands of time.
The cloud of the gods
shadow the parts.
Clothing the clouds found in your height.

Mountain of meeting.
Olympus
Roman field.
Aye, the fig leaves grips.
Aye, olympus field.
Now feed the mouths of the gods given by gods.
Olympus, proof your height!
As a room for the beings of ROME.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Urshula Davis 15 June 2012

This was a nice read and very clever in a way! ..keep writing I enjoyed!

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The Poet Darkling 15 June 2012

I like this poem! A couple small typo's, first, dropp the 's' on 'feeds' in the third line; and 'proof' in the second to last line should be 'prove' instead. Otherwise very good and I look forward to reading more from you as time allows! Janelda

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Eyerusalem Tesfaye 15 June 2012

I like it...its nicely written, i enjoyed reading this poem: -) nice job

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Miss Darkness 16 June 2012

nice work dear it was nice and i enjoy reading this one :))

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Micah Ogberhie 19 July 2012

A poem of high praise indeed. beautifully described as though you know it so well like your living room. kudos lord of ink

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Unwritten Soul 16 July 2012

Like a flame of fire around the Olympus, you burn all dark to rise the light from this write..like it! ! :) Keep writing_Unwritten Soul

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Marieta Maglas 26 June 2012

beautiful descriptive poem about the Greek Olympus mountain-thank you for sharing

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Neela Nath Das 21 June 2012

The pages of the past with its glory is presented effortlessly.Marvelous!

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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 16 June 2012

Whoa! I love the syntax. Your titles are well alluring. Great job!

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