On A Computer Screen Poem by Savita Tyagi

On A Computer Screen

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Some time when you sit and contemplate
Think of your life as a Word document
Displaying on a computer screen
Your past deeds are words that have been deleted
Thinking about them won't improve the document
Trash them for ever
Time is still there to correct your mistakes
Add some good vocabulary
To polish your dull writings
Let's call them your good deeds
Give your document a supple body
Support of good habits
And positive thinking
If old ideas are not workable
Format is confused and complicated
Goals not reachable
Don't be afraid to revise and rewrite
Devise new format
Change the old script
Countless possibilities are there
All just click of a mouse away
But watch out for limits
Built in for your software
It is not programmed to work
In systems incompatible
Or to by pass set commands
Just learn to work around those hurdles
And be aware of blips and viruses
I believe such a marvelous tool
At your disposal demands
Your full attention
Use it in a best possible way
To create your story.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 17 November 2017

Time is still there to correct your mistakes Add some good vocabulary To polish your dull writings -An excellent piece of work with a precious message..Liked it..10++++

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Savita Tyagi 17 November 2017

Thank you so much Dr. Dillip for reading my poems and your generous comments. Appreciate it very much. Welcome to PH.com. It is a great site to read and share poetry. It would be a pleasure to read your poems.

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Bri Edwards 17 December 2015

Think of your life as a Word document Displaying on a computer screen .................as i kept reading, i had to remind myself you were speaking of people's lives, and giving us advice. of course i NEED NO ADVICE! i can and do sometimes mess my life up without any help from anybody. well, ok, i DO get some help! they are called wives. hee-hee. bri :) nice writing. and i've added more short poems to Section A in December's showcase. thanks for your feedback on the showcase. it is heartening to hear that SOMEONE reads and enjoys! ! ! any more poems from you this month?

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