On A Couch Of Thoughts Poem by SALINI NAIR

On A Couch Of Thoughts

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A languid dusk of pensiveness
Twilight of frisky departure
On a lazy couch of dreaminess
Lie as to sink in emptiness

A lazy breeze passed with chillness
Takes to the frozen past of life
Soothes the empty part of life
Takes to the wings of tenderness

Shade that leave an empty loft
Mirage that fills in shadows
Like the vigor of moving froth
Shatter in the silence of lazy tides

Bliss to the court of hazy life
Garb that spared in naked shadows
Takes to the sprint of futile life
That wreck in the hands of pensiveness

Feel that takes to the mourn of life
Dreamy strand of gracious life
Hear the hymn of life on earth
Writhe that fills in an open heart

Gaze at the stars in blissful night
There in the heart a hymn displeased
Takes to the yard of pensiveness
There a breeze tattles in silent tune!

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Friday, November 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: evening
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
feel the breeze at an eve....
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 14 November 2014

A lazy breeze passed with chillness Takes to the frozen past of life Soothes the empty part of life Takes to the wings of tenderness A beautiful description.

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 November 2014

Great work! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Ramesh Rai 16 November 2014

Each stanza of this poem is effulgent. Thanks for sharing

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Valsa George 14 November 2014

A languid mood prevails through out the poem, though there is breeze in the twilight and stats in the night sky! A poem with many great lines!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 14 November 2014

Nice soulful moments of evening captured in a wonderful way......very well composed......amazing write

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 14 November 2014

Write that fills in an open heart......In fact it seems that the poet written the poem in an open heart emotion and likes it very much.

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