Venus Fire

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On My Way To School (Ballad Attempt) - Poem by Venus Fire

It was a pleasant day
walking down the road
too bad it's so early
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Comments about On My Way To School (Ballad Attempt) by Venus Fire

  • Gold Star - 26,918 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (2/20/2015 10:47:00 PM)

    Good imaginations in the poem and likes. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,148 Points Marieta Maglas (11/15/2009 12:56:00 PM)

    I arrive at my goal

    wonderful confessional poem

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