On That Island Poem by Naomi Burdett

On That Island

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On that island
theres a war going on
no love in that picture
but anger is strong

theres swords on guns
and bombs being dropped
there are holes in the floor
and it hasnt stopped

one country on another
not thinking about the pain
all humans on humans
i cant see the gain

on that island
there are people no more
war killed them ALL
but tell me what for?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jeffrey Spahr-Summers 12 September 2005

Good job!

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Kelly Allen Vinal 12 September 2005

For someone who is 14, your writing is vivid and most remarkable. Keep this up!

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