..On The Clouds, Having My Walk.. Poem by Elena Sandu

..On The Clouds, Having My Walk..

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Carefully, I step on clouds
Trying to keep self very light.
I let the air to freely flow
Am deeply breathing
Nice.. and.. slow.
Hard to feel the air, it barely moves
Where is the wind? It doesn't blow!
Warm and powerless
I feel so light
That clouds are moving me
From the left, .. to the right
Letting things happen,
I do not fight.
Happily follow my clouds
Walk, jump, run and roll on white white
fluffy clouds
All of a sudden everything stops.
Me too:
I watch the blue blue sky
Then slowly raise and open wide
my palms.
Inside,
The left one
eyes opened
My King once a Prince
The right palm
my treasured little princess
almost a Queen..
Amazed, but not afraid
They look around and smile.
Why? ! ?
Because they know,
I won't let go.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 06 June 2012

A beautiful poem, very imaginative and gentle.

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Joseph Anderson 26 May 2012

A rich metaphoric write full of imagery, entertaining as a reverie- well done

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Captain Cur 25 May 2012

Difficult to determing meaning, could be your faith in your palms, or your children. I liked the metaphor of flowing and rolling with the clouds, living life as it comes. Well written.

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