On The Evening My Heart Stood Still Poem by Samuel Stuart Pennell

On The Evening My Heart Stood Still

Rating: 5.0


On the evening I met you,
my heart stood still

there was stillness all around you
and the image of your face
was etched onto my memory

I feel you breathing,
I feel your closeness

Amen

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 25 February 2009

This is so beautiful Samuel....thank you...10++

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Chidera Anuonye 06 July 2015

Lovely concise and beautiful

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Carol-Anne Spalding 25 April 2010

I am silenced...you took my breath away...

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Cassandra Robinson 19 April 2010

Swept me off my feet!

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C. Keskuela 16 April 2010

beautiful, loving and emotion filled without too much unnecessary thought Well done! I love it!

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Maria Barbara Korynt 25 February 2009

Few words, many contents, interesting structure of the poem. He isn't chatted away through unnecessarily. Very much I like him. I am greeting and I thank :) Maria Barbara Korynt

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