On The High Seas Poem by indira babbellapati

On The High Seas

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two ancient bodies set on a voyage
on the high seas of passion

outside through the window
the mighty sea roared

the waves, rose and fell
at their rhytmic best...

25sep2009
23.28hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rakesh Bedi 25 September 2009

A symbolic poem......scripted beautifully, befitting to the concept......

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Obinna Eruchie 05 October 2009

A deep poem for a thought, and interesting to read.

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Ranjit Ravindran 04 October 2009

' two ancient bodies set on a voyage on the high seas of passion' I wish the voyagers the most rewarding experiences of a lifetime! Bon Voyage!

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Yelena M. 02 October 2009

What is implied is not directly told here..perfect poetry deserving the highest seas :) Thanks for sharing. Yelena M.

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Dr Kamran Haider 29 September 2009

I wonder at your imaginative power... Passion can be infectious... Hope the ship didn't sink... :)

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Indira Babbellapati 28 September 2009

From: Brett Ackerman (Colorado Springs United States; Male; 44) To: Indira Babbellapati Date Time: 9/28/2009 9: 34: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: on the high seas Water trumps everything when you witness it's majesty of movement.

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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