On The Low! ! ! Poem by Compton Wright

On The Low! ! !

Rating: 4.6


On the low where Lust sings in the winds
Where broken hearts never heal and repair themselves
From the women that cheated her love for such addiction
From under the radar and under her skin she felt a cold pulse
That was from my hands and lips as if my love died for her
As I spitted game on a lucky girl that will take me home
She became my poison to my heart as it ran through my veins

And down my soul hearing her moaning like sweet melodies
But something felt wrong like an absence inside the room itself
Feeling her heartbeat was only showing letters saying…Cheater
Footsteps start to come up the steps but her dirty words
Deafens my ears to hear anything at all but the footsteps
Continue to become louder like an army stomping to war
A shadow cast among the door as the moans and screams
Start to excite the moment even more but suddenly BANG!

The door was kicked down with the love of my life
Showing tears in her eyes of such betrayal and untrustworthy
I knew I was caught red handed but who knew that death
Would to into play of this drama and confusion of devouring lust
The last words I heard from her mouth was sheer fear and doubt
“If I can’t love you than no one will and tell your little friend goodbye”
She pulls out a.38 revolver and shot my friend with many benefits

As her blood soaked the bed and the sheets I heard her whisper
“Help me” than passes away; everything turning into a nightmare
As she pointed the gun at me as I'm in complete shock
Couldn’t move a muscle or even a nerve as she looked at me
Blew me a kiss like it was my kiss of death to remember
Shots fired, flashes appeared through the window
Cops patrolled the room for any evidence
As they reported from police records and news that
It was double homicide and a suicide………….
Who knew that on the low would be so…lethal

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 03 July 2009

Deeply moving my brother...each line touches the heart....expressed with pure emotion....solid craftmanship..10++

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LOVEFOOL Aka 19 March 2009

Powerful and intense 10++

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Kimberley Kerry 15 March 2009

wow, very discriptive! : D

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 14 March 2009

You can cheat only one person in the world..............Yourself............... Good Write.........

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