On The Melting Of Snow In Spring Poem by Paige Scott
On The Melting Of Snow In Spring
As I glanced at the last of the snow melting away,
I noticed the bright spring day;
As snow melts away, better days it brings—
Where spring sun shines, and the sparrow sings!
striking image of melting snow in spring from a fresh out look...I enjoy reading your work, this poem gets a 10
Nice one. I like the alliteration in the last line. It's a pity you couldn't get a good rhyme for that last line - try working on it.
Another descriptive write - so glad the snow has gone in England that's for sure. Regards Mark
Very fresh and nicely crafted. Your poem has a 'spring' in its step that lifts the spirit.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Sweet happy little poem, Paige. Loved it! Keep writing and sharing with us. A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn