On This Day… Poem by Charlie F. Kane

On This Day…



On this day we celebrate love.
We celebrate that indefinable feeling
We call ‘love’.
We celebrate love,
That makes the world go around,
We celebrate love,
What we all strive for,
We celebrate love
That these two have for each other.

The gold rings-
We see them as the symbols of love.
As one gives to the other,
To show their dedication
For all time.
As time goes on,
The rings will grow old,
And begin to fade.
But as a symbol of love
It will always remain.

© Charlie F. Kane

1/08/06

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary-Elizabeth Conn 13 August 2006

Another good poem- although I'd say the first stanza is more of something you would hear in a song (not criticism- that's pretty cool) . Keep it up. :)

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Charlie F. Kane

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Solihull, Birmingham
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