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On Thy Wall

On thy wall you scream my name,
You say go further, and you make your noises as I do,
You ask me, 'be gentle',
I promise I will,
But only at the start my love,
So again you say my name aloud with another pulse of me,
And we stand around in gentle caress of eachother,
For the rest of tonight

Submitted: Monday, May 17, 2010

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  • Kesav Easwaran (5/23/2010 8:43:00 PM)

    erotic emotions brought out in soft solid poetic lines...good poem scene you are providing...in sky blue canvas...10

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