Once A Week Poem by Lorenzo A. Fernandez Jr.

Once A Week

Rating: 4.3


I’d like to be
in a place where
I could be
all alone like a hermit.
That’s it.

I want to be
a hermit and there’s
no regret if once a week
I go to the city
to buy necessity
and, if I’m lucky,
love and then
back again to my cave.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 01 August 2011

So is this a poem you write 'Once a week' if yes you need to make it more in a week hahha coz it sounds good! ...the poem simply good and i like it so much..maybe you just went back to cave now but keep writing this, it was beautiful, humble and full of dream, but all dream is possible...Keep it up Lorenzo_Unwritten Soul

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