Once Apon A Time... Poem by Kim Fritz

Once Apon A Time...

Rating: 5.0


Once apon a time
there was a girl
she was so innocent
but one day she looked into the mirror
and was shoked by what she saw
the person in the mirror seemed nothing like her
her hair and clothes were different then before
she left her old friends for a new crew
and when a guy would come along
she left them too
everyone said she was fake
but she did not belive them
now looking into the mirror
she asks herself
'how could this be?
this girl seemed so different and opposite
from me
but all along this girl was me.'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 18 December 2008

a change in her for the good guy...artful imaginative write on feelings inside the mind...nicely done, Kim...10

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