Ala' Elouri

Rookie (December 30,1996 / San Clemente, California)

Once In A Lifetime - Poem by Ala' Elouri

Don't come back
With a smile on your face
Don't come back
With roses hidden behind your back
Don't come back,
It's too late, I will never forgive
I was mistaken for trying to give
I gave more than I recieved.
I supposed we would be a family and achieve.
But you just don't know how to value such unique things!
Selfish, unthoughtful, unsensible
Funny how I never realized
That you had those charatestics deep inside.
I was blinded by the flame of love
But now, I will smile
I will live my life
I didn't lose, I gained
I did a mistake nevertheless I learned my mistake.
Keep in mind
When I came to life
I came as one.
There will come a day where you'll realize...
I'm like death.
I come once in a lifetime.


Comments about Once In A Lifetime by Ala' Elouri

  • Rookie Ala' Elouri (7/21/2013 6:32:00 AM)

    @ Gulsher, Yeah I know. Yeah it is actually a personal story that I've been through in my life.All of my poem are just feelings.

    @C.P. Yeah I agree with you. Thank you for your comment :)

    @Dave Walker: Thank you: $ my pleasure really.

    @Tiku: Thank you very much: $ A great encouragment I will. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,353 Points Tiku . (7/20/2013 8:44:00 AM)

    Beautiful ink.Loved the way you responded.Keep inking. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,913 Points Dave Walker (7/20/2013 8:11:00 AM)

    A great poem like it, a great write. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 968 Points C. P. Sharma (7/20/2013 7:48:00 AM)

    Life just for a moment winks
    Why not with it lip sync! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,323 Points Xelam Kan™ (7/20/2013 7:41:00 AM)

    Ya its happens, sometimes such illusions veil our senses....... :)
    Is it your personal story or just poetic fancies? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 20, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, July 22, 2013


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