Once There Was Life Poem by Achyut Das

Once There Was Life



Unfinished work at all to be sighted, unfinished work to be blamed,
What about the unfinished life oh god is it to be framed?
Friendly thoughts what was behind us all the time, today
It's not there to be truly dedicated, what have I done oh my friend,
For what reason have you got me blamed?

Fond of being friendly I was always there for you to share,
You failed at many works but didn't I care?
Trusted lines that was in there between us that day, today
It's not there to be shared truthfully, why my friend,
Why have you got me so much to spare?

Always I held you to be the one above me, truly ignored the god.
What about the unfinished friendship love and life?
That heart full of love wasn't there today!
It's not there to feel, why my friend,
Why is this happening to all and to be sure in my life?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My own story of disheartening by friends.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kabyaneel 05 December 2017

Amateur...need improvement s

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