Once Was Poem by Lyndsay Thomas
Once Was
You've always been my better half
Always there to make me laugh
Today feels like we're drifting apart
I know it, I can feel it in my heart
You said some things I didn't want to hear
But you made a good point, precise and clear
It always feels like i'm the only one to be blamed
'Our relationship just isn't the same' you claimed
You said 'You distant yourself' because you 'no longer feel important to me'
But I've done the same, I completely agree
We've never had a fight this bad
My heart and mind feel so sad
As I sit here and cry
I look up into the sky
Hoping this isn't the end
Can't we make amends?
Its a topic I'm quite familiar with (have written sloppy verses about lol.) I like that you used very simple rhyme schemes. Sometimes people get so caught up trying to use fancy language that they lose their readers in the midst of it all. A simple, but impacting write, well done. ~NIka
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4/20/2024 5:05:03 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Well written Lindsay and I know how you feel, been there a few times.