One Day Poem by Ashmita Kamlesh

One Day

Rating: 4.5


One day I fell in Love
It was like happiness
Emerging from my soul
So, it was like angel wings
It was heaven
Out of the blue
So bright like light
I fly to a land
I meet my lover
We went out to see the blue sea
One day I fell in love
It was a like flower
Spreading out on mountains
Walking on the mountain with my lover holding hands
It was unbelievable
Then one day,
I fell in love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chitra - 04 February 2010

the wonder elements of nature remind us of the experince of falling in love. they unfold so many pleasant thoughts.

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Eyan Desir 20 November 2009

It was like a flower..correction good write

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Sabrina Jubahar 12 November 2009

sweet piece. falling in love does create happiness, cos love makes u smile, and 'light'. always!

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Manu Jadwani 12 November 2009

good one..it seems we all have imaginary lovers..our inspirations are always unseen..

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