One Equation Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
One Equation
Above all relations
Stands one equation
How much do we care about neighbor?
Rush for help and call for
It is natural to look after family
Its members and show the affinity
Do we pay attention sincerely towards society?
Lt me regret in saying' we are not sincere towards humanity'
We may find animals
Show affection upon arrivals
Of new born as welcome addition
This is called blood relation
Some of the relations naturally exist
We are aligned perfectly and positively insist
Upon is strict adherence among members
So each member feels and remembers
Let us make some more relations as a unique one
Community service and help towards poor is best one
Care for aged and women may invite blessings
Do not allow it to go as missing
Fine consideration but... roger houlding3 hours ago I found this hard to read. The rhymes felt forced and slightly off key.
Such a wonderful and heartfelt poem, Hasmukh! One Equation, sums up your poem eloquently, bringing all thoughts into one conclusion to help all of humanity, not just those we love. Society needs our help also, if we are all to exist in a positive environment, one that fights evil and injustice for everyone. Reach out and help everyone feel the love and caring of community, not only family. Very wonderful message Hasmukh, an intense poem that everyone should heed. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
Amen, thats it! 3 hours ago by David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost) | Reply
M. Houston xvery nice. 51 minutes ago by M. Houston | Reply
good seemekc seemekc3 hours ago Loving one another is a gift for both parties ..
Fine consideration but... roger houlding3 hours ago I found this hard to read. The rhymes felt forced and slightly off key.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Above all relations Stands one equation