One Foot In The Water Poem by Annette Lohan

One Foot In The Water

Rating: 3.8


Red jacket skirted beneath blue wellies
Walking the burn behind our house.
Stream trickles over smooth brown rocks
That crumble and roll from my feet.
Water steals slowly, inching up my boot
Drawing me deeper down murky green.
A step stops in wonder as liquid rises,
Builds a bowing arc of balancing light..
Seeps down to my sole, a cool washing.
I'm walking with a river in my welly.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gina Onyemaechi 30 January 2006

Well-drawn. Regards.

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David Darbyshire 30 January 2006

Welcome to our site Annette, poor wet foot, ahhhhh dave xxx

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