saadat tahir

Veteran Poet - 1,361 Points (21011965 / Islamabad-Pakistan)

One God’s Measure … 3008-2k13 - Poem by saadat tahir

Cramming knowledge wont make genteel those deep within uncouth
Brass never turns to gold even set with ruby’s jewel’s truth
Miserly canst charity dole even if they own millions treasure
Bhuleya death in Medina cant heaven get, sans ONE GOD’s measure

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saadat tahir
30th Aug,2k13

Translated from a very well known quartet from Baba Bhulley Shah, a revered and very well known/read sufi saintly poet of Punjab in RAJ time Pakistan/India (Uch near Ahmad pur Sharkia of the state of Bhawalpur-presently Paksitan. Born: 1680, Uch, Pakistan. Died: 1757, Kasur, Pakistan)
Uch is an important historical city, said to have been founded by Alexander the Great

Elm Parhyan Ashraaf Na Howan Jehray Howan Asal Kameenay
Pital Kadi Nai Sona Banda Bhanwen Jarye Laal Nageenay
Shoom Theen Kadi Nahi Sadqa Honda Pawen Howan Lakh Khazenay
Bhulya Baaj TOHEED Nai Jannat Milni Bhanwen Marye Wich Madinay.

Comments about One God’s Measure … 3008-2k13 by saadat tahir

  • Gold Star - 11,010 Points Soulful Heart (3/30/2014 1:18:00 PM)

    Superbly translated...thanks for sharing..... (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,964 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (10/13/2013 11:24:00 PM)

    Wow so there r other urdu type dialects too! U did a wondrful job with d translation, esp likd d line where u meant, 'education cant make d uncouth genteel' true didactic poetic lines throughout. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,112 Points Heather Wilkins (9/26/2013 12:44:00 PM)

    a great translation enjoyed the read (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,156 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/6/2013 9:04:00 AM)

    Universal truths beautifully put by the great poet and your rendering is so beautiful. Thank you for delivering the message to all. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,014 Points Yasmeen Khan (9/3/2013 10:35:00 AM)

    It feels satisfying that a great mystic's punjabi verse is recognized and rendered in English by a contemporary poet. These lines intelligently translated lines bear great wisdom. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Indira Babbellapati (8/30/2013 1:58:00 AM)

    feels goooood to read... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 30, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, August 30, 2013

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