One Is The Morsel... [snacking; Writing Rhymes; Personal; Short] Poem by Bri Edwards

One Is The Morsel... [snacking; Writing Rhymes; Personal; Short]

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One is the morsel I popped into my mouth.
I chewed it, swallowed it, and it’s heading ‘South’.
Now I’ve had six, I think, while writing this verse.
It’s NOT sugar-coated, which sometimes …… is a tooth’s curse.

Seven or eight I’m up to at my last uncertain count.
If I were using a spoon, that number I would surmount ….
in one healthy spoonful, complete with some milk,
and some nuts, banana, or berries, or food of that ilk.

But today I’m concentrating more on writing than eating,
so I take one dry morsel into my mouth and go on repeating.
Only a dozen perhaps of these oat-wheat-barley morsels have passed …..
into my stomach so far, as I’m eating sloooowlyy, not fast.

Without the milk [about sixteen now] the morsels are dry,
and the crumbs at the back of my throat are making me cry.
Well, not “cry” exactly, but the irritation ….. which they cause,
made one tear spring forth from my left eye …… and pause.

Yes, it paused over my cheek bone, and now it has dried up.
I call out: “Dear! Bring me some milk, PLEASE ……., at least half a cup.”

(April 7, 2015)

Monday, April 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: food
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
well, i love to make up poems to pass some of my time. and what better accompaniment is there than a snack? ............... well, no, i tried THAT once while writing a poem, but i fell out of the bed! dry cereal snacking is MUCH safer!

bri :) the story IS true, except for calling out for the milk.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stephen Katona 26 April 2015

You're a true comedien. I must copy your inspiration to write about these sort of moments in life. I apolygise for finding your misfortune funny yet again!

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Rajesh Thankappan 18 April 2015

Taking a cue from Kim Barney, I would suggest walnuts.

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Jak Black 14 April 2015

How do you find the time to write, With such an enormous appetite?

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Kim Barney 13 April 2015

Cashews are much better than cereal that's dry. Taste better, at least, but their fat content's high.

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