One Look Back Poem by Fallen Pieces

One Look Back

Rating: 5.0


Allow me to swim your way
and cast aside morning's ablaze,
these weary fins will controvert pain
for even one's simple name
A vision such as your own
is rarely found but near a throne;
by Royal decree as often spared
to enchant therefore my stare
But a human being in which you are
engraving an arrow within my heart
Teary eyes are turned away;
no longer a reason in which to stay
A useless swim in lack of pride
forget the evening's sunrise
One look back helps one win
to only notice My Love with fins

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ameer Mcarthur 17 September 2008

Very enchanting poetry my fallen.im fallen into pieces already! ! !

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Sarwar Chowdhury 14 September 2008

no waste of words.......astonishing......'one look back'! ...........10

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