Fallen Pieces

Rookie (10-07-? ? / Everywhere)

One Look Back - Poem by Fallen Pieces

Allow me to swim your way
and cast aside morning's ablaze,
these weary fins will controvert pain
for even one's simple name
A vision such as your own
is rarely found but near a throne;
by Royal decree as often spared
to enchant therefore my stare
But a human being in which you are
engraving an arrow within my heart
Teary eyes are turned away;
no longer a reason in which to stay
A useless swim in lack of pride
forget the evening's sunrise
One look back helps one win
to only notice My Love with fins

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  • Rookie Ameer Mcarthur (9/17/2008 6:10:00 PM)

    Very enchanting poetry my fallen.im fallen into pieces already! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Sarwar Chowdhury (9/14/2008 2:15:00 PM)

    no waste of words.......astonishing......'one look back'! ...........10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 14, 2008

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