One Proud Someone Poem by Naida Nepascua Supnet

One Proud Someone

Rating: 4.8


I know of someone who pretends so hard
This poem is her story


Your eyes pretend they show some lies
Your stares are cold they blend some signs
Your smiles are fake you fake them good
These you can't hide behind good mood

You jest so well you laugh with them
But do they know you're good with scheme
They so believe again they're fooled
You weave emotions and your words ruled

You turn your back I know you're sad
You turn again you look so grand
But why pretend you're one rich kind
While you can't leave the truth behind

You act so good but I saw you cry
Stop pretending just say goodbye
Your love for money your love for good life
Brought you and your family in deadly strife

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 14 November 2011

Well said by frnd Jacqui Board, we all suffer from pride sometimes.This poem is just like reality show of human life which is hard to dispense. best write.

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Jacqui Broad 08 November 2011

Hello... I think we all suffer from pride sometimes. Most times it's to hide away insecurity and sensitivity...pride is okay, talk about vanity and I turn away...your poem is touching a very tender spot - a human's pride. This is great!

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Faith Bernardo 08 November 2011

I super like this poem.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

Naida Nepascua Supnet

bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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