One Wet Eye Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

One Wet Eye

Rating: 5.0


They came with light
They came with gifts
They came with flowers
They came with wishes
They said, we are angels

Said we can do magic
Can make dreams true
Can make rivers flow
Can make lives glow
So tell, what you wish?

Do you wish for fame?
Or want to be rich?
Or be knowledgeable?
Or else wish for love?
Else wish all of these

So wish, they told me
So first I said, thanks
Said, I have one wish
Only one wish to ask
That is “One Wet Eye”

I wish for one eye
Eye, which I never saw
Eye, which I never knew
I wish for such an eye
To wet, when I die

It’s my wish, I said
They wished and said
Wish it would come true
And left me with a note
“Make y’our’ wish true”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rago rago 27 April 2009

Really touching and stunning poem.......a compassionate thought.

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 27 April 2009

this is a magnificent poem..well said and expressed!

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Catrina Heart 02 May 2009

eloquent poem of wishes and hopes that are being hampered by life's crosses...to make a one wet eye............lovely!

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Louis Rams 27 April 2009

when you go to the other side, an eye will be left for you to cry. gr8t write a ten

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Janell Cressman 27 April 2009

again another amazing poem! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Eyan Desir 27 April 2009

Well writen Dear poet i can totally Relate with tht Good job Top marks

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Joseph Poewhit 27 April 2009

Interesting poem a little far-out

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