Only A Ghost Of A House Poem by Marilyn Lott

Only A Ghost Of A House

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The house was a sad and pitiful sight
When I saw it on I-40 as I took a drive
I was shocked the moment I saw it
It didn’t look like it could possibly survive

The boards were crooked and warped
Many loose and hanging down
This two story house was isolated
Many miles outside of town

Its usefulness had died years ago
Along with the people who had lived here
I wondered what it would take to destroy it
A storm would blow it down I feared

The grass had grown tall and lank
Engulfing this poor sad home
Nobody to live in its walls
No animals around it to roam

It seemed as though its life shouldn’t end
But of course it was too late for it now
If only the fields could be used again
I’d love to see a horse and a plow

In my mind I listened carefully
As I crept in like a quiet little mouse
But its life was over forever and now
It was only a ghost of a house!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
ppp sss 14 July 2009

I have always been fascinated with the idea of houses representing lives. The shape, decor, architecture and condition all metaphors for someone's life. Indeed I have used it in my own poetry. Though maybe not the way you intended it, I looked at this with eyes of my own perspective...and I enjoyed it very much.

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Thad Wilk 29 March 2008

A charming poem Only A Ghost of a House i'd say; it makes you ponder when looking yonder, at a place only ghosts now stay! Best wishes! Friend Thad *10*! !

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Edwin Robinette 29 March 2008

This was beautifully done....loved it. Reminds me of a lot of barns I have seen over the years. This house once meant something to someone. Well done!

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Sidi Mahtrow 29 March 2008

Perhaps your ghost of a house Isn't a ghost at all But only what you see Which is the roof and walls. Inside you will find it filled with memories That are there, though covered with dust Happy times and sadness that no one sees Yet a history of a family's living trust. And yes the boards are warped and worn And the weeds grow about the yard Like the carrion Of a crow or some other bird. That's all that's left After the bones are picked clean. What Nature's dealt To Man it seems. But that 'Ghost of a House' Looks over the fields And revives in most, The memory of bountiful yields. Where man (and woman) Committed to try When times were rough and there was no plan Yet with faith in God, they'd get by. And they moved on to another day And left the house as witness And to say, That there will be light in the darkness.

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Marilyn Lott

Marilyn Lott

Washington state USA
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