Fatima Obaid

Rookie - 225 Points (19 Dec / Rawalpindi)

Only For My Mother, Love You Mom Forever. - Poem by Fatima Obaid

Satisfaction on your face
Make me satisfy
Watching smiling peace at your face
I forget my all worries
I always remember the time
When you sacrifice only for me
I know it was a tough time for you
When you sacrifice for me
You don’t even cry infront of me
You just smile infront of me
Your smile is a wonderful gift
That I receive every morning for my life’s lift
Looking at your laugh
Make me to laugh
Your kisses and hugs is a war against worries
Your caressing over my head is the most relaxing moment
Your lullaby is the most awesome song
That I hear every night
You feel worry on my every step
You thank God, for saving me everyday
Seriously, your sacrifices are countless
Like the grains of sand at ocean
I can’t pay for all those sacrifices you did
But I can make myself what you wanted me to
OMM! I have forgotten all words, really stuck
There is no perfect word in my dictionary to thank you
You are mine everything
Thanks for being my mother.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

a poem for your sacrifices

Comments about Only For My Mother, Love You Mom Forever. by Fatima Obaid

  • Veteran Poet - 1,258 Points Shahzia Batool (5/12/2013 4:13:00 AM)

    Seriously, your sacrifices are countless
    Like the grains of sand at ocean

    yes, countless sacrifices, Good simile n excellent poem! (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,151 Points Sallam Yassin (5/8/2013 3:35:00 PM)

    great piece for the most angelic love
    thanks (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Waseem A Malla (5/7/2013 9:05:00 AM)

    nice tribute to your mother... She must b proud (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 2, 2013


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