Only In My Dreams Poem by Pensive Phoenix

Only In My Dreams

Rating: 5.0


I would sail to the other side of the world,
If that’s what it takes
To forget your face.
I’d rather dream, than face reality.
Because I can’t imagine life,
Without you by my side.

Last night I had a dream
And I thought that it was real
And when I saw you there
I reached out my hand,
But it only touched air

And now there’s nothing left to fill this space
I can pretend, but it will never erase
I’d rather dream, than face reality.
Because, I can’t imagine life,
Without you by my side.

Last night I had a dream
And I thought that it was real
And when I saw you there
I reached out my hand,
But it only touched air

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 27 November 2009

Very genuine feelings expressed here. Thank you for sharing. Kind regards, Sandra

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Greenwolfe 1962 03 April 2009

This is a finely structured poem. In fact, it has almost a perfect structure. I am really impressed by the work the writer did on this. It shows a true dedication to his work. Really fine. Loved reading it. Clear and meaningful. GW62

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Gabriel Joel 31 March 2009

Very well expressed best of wishes

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Gabriel Joel 31 March 2009

Very well expressed

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