Only In My Heart Poem by Emma Kessler

Only In My Heart

Rating: 5.0


You seem to be here
Hiding in my shadow
Often you feel so real
That I feel your breath
But you only exist in my mind,
my heart and my dreams
Sometimes you seem so real
That I believe you are alive
So you have become
A strong advisor
A close friend
A true love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lindbergh Hughes 14 December 2009

A nice, sweet and great poem.The way you start this one with the lines: 'You seem to be here Hiding in my shadow..' it's a beautiful thought.Indeed, the whole idea inside the poem is wonderful, great! !

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Amy Marie 06 November 2011

Another very nice poem...who could this be about? I'd love to know. I know exactly how this feels.

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Najib Altawell 18 February 2010

Wonderful poem - what you feel within the expression of these words reflect a reality on both levels!

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 23 December 2009

Nobody feels that pain..then why you, me and people like us are still stuck with that? But your words are really amazing and hurtful.

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Christina Phan 18 December 2009

very beautiful and touching i can relate too it 10++ keep up the gd work

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John Knight 18 December 2009

Hi Emma - I love this - it is elegant - just like you. On PH we share cerebrally and we exist in each others minds. This cerebral relationship is wonderful because it transcends space - time - age - culture and allows a very objective appraisal of each others poems. To each other we are Strong Advisors (although our critique is gentle) . and we become - through verbal interaction Close Friends. Your poem explores a more transient and ephemeral 'supporter' an Angel perhaps. There is an analogy with our relationship (you and I) after one gentle exchange. There is another level which involves the Heart and our Dreams and by mutual exchange and understanding we become a True Love which is awesome. Because we are both in the PH Family I have chosen to interpret your lovely evocative poem in a PH context. Thank you - Excellent. Love You in Poetry - JOHN X

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