Only Oldie Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Only Oldie

Rating: 5.0


I remember only oldie,
Grey hair looks like Goldie,
Her temperament and anger same as before
But she is liked and praised therefore

She is now in law
But prefers to remain out of law
Nicely engaged with customary routine
Happy to be with daughters in line

I shall pay her due respect
As she is the only one in good act
She may come fighting and go back
But mind that she is intelligent and not crack

She has way of her own
Hardly prefers to remain known
She is teacher but rally bad one
She won’t hear to any one

She is principled lady
Cares for self and not somebody
But so much with humor and self respect
Always in line with circumstances and on track

I love and like her as any body would love to friend
Many times she has shown me exit and road to end
But she is as lovely as anybody else
She has pride, honor and wants nothing else

What would she expect from all?
A nice behavior and descent call
She won’t tolerate any kind nuisance
She may come back heavily at once

To have such friend as treasure
The happiness and joy you can never measure
It is how you spend your time with dearest one
As at least there is some one to remind someone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 12 July 2011

That was a honest sight of friend side...well it good as always, a lil different spice you add (in personal opinion) but all good and justified_Unwritten Soul

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To have such friend as treasure The happiness and joy you can never measure It is how you spend your time with dearest one As at least there is some one to remind someone

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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