Unwritten Soul


Only Time Knows - Poem by Unwritten Soul

No one knows
Where is life now sending us
Scripture of destiny remain untold
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Of course God knows, but time is the one who keep the secret..
This is a lyric that i wrote for my friend who recently need to go
Where and why, no i dont know..things happened in our days
we never know, never we will be, as we are in puzzle in life
some we know some we never we know, maybe it is better
But God knows what the best behind all of fate he wrote
The lyric is for my ballad song with the theme, farewell
but it not a goodbye song, because only time knows
when we will meet again
and only time knows
I believe it_Unwritten Soul

Comments about Only Time Knows by Unwritten Soul

  • Gold Star - 14,135 Points * Sunprincess * (8/26/2014 8:51:00 PM)

    .........I find in each of your poems you leave a little piece of your heart and soul....and this one was no exception....another fabulous and outstanding write....loved reading every line... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Frank James Davis (4/11/2013 9:56:00 AM)

    Much of it strikes me as a mesmerizing, profoundly wise chant.
    All of it, hauntingly beautiful, Soul! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Marissa Liebowitz (3/30/2013 7:11:00 PM)

    O my God, i wish i could write like you! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,421 Points Hans Vr (3/30/2013 6:05:00 AM)

    So true, What a very sound wisdom, Soul.
    Only time knows. We can plan, we can prepare, we can expect, we can anticipate, but what will really happen, only time knows. I love the whole idea. How much do our actions and our thoughts determine what will happen in the future? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 205 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (3/27/2013 11:45:00 PM)

    Masterpiece this poem is sir, I love how you painted the pictures, I love the lines your brushes left and the picture is so perfect....yes no one knows what the future has in store for him/her...only time knows.
    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (3/27/2013 6:55:00 AM)

    Please don't let me be the last one to go! To step out the door and this Time shut it and
    take the last deep breath and walk away alone with no one looking... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (3/27/2013 6:50:00 AM)

    we are all gathered at the door... laughing, giggling... then we all get silent and one of us takes a deep
    breath and steps forward and starts walking away down the path. We all are transfixed... stare as the individual
    slowy gets smaller and smaller and then disappears. We are silent for a moment... then giggling and laughing
    erupts again till it is Time for the next one to go. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,860 Points Diane Hine (3/26/2013 7:33:00 AM)

    Although we put so much effort into life, whatever happens to us is inevitable - it's a strange paradox.
    This is a truly beautiful poem about accepting the inevitable. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 404 Points Rekha Mandagere (3/26/2013 2:30:00 AM)

    I'm just perplexed going through these matured lines. How beautifully soul captured the secret of time in his touching lines! Wonderful message: -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 117 Points Terry O'leary (3/21/2013 11:32:00 AM)

    So true... very nice... Terry (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,433 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (3/17/2013 8:13:00 AM)

    Of tears and smiles, our destiny and fate u hav pend a perceptive wonderful poem epic style i lovd it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 175 Points Vizard Dhawan (3/17/2013 4:10:00 AM)

    beautiful poem...so true amd awesome write..really enjoyed a lot reading this piece... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 72 Points Guess Who (3/15/2013 4:55:00 PM)

    By the ink of sorrow it was written Amazing expression here.
    Nice poem Soul, of course Only god knows what time is hiding for us........ i liked how you divided your poem here just to make a simple message...... (No one knows what our fates would be,)
    Keep your pen wet and amaze us...... GuessWho (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 117 Points Terry O'leary (3/15/2013 3:05:00 PM)

    A wonderful, wise message (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,303 Points Valerie Dohren (3/15/2013 3:04:00 PM)

    None of us know our destiny, and it can change from day to day. I think it is better that we don't know where we are headed - great write as always Soul. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,631 Points Neela Nath (3/14/2013 11:38:00 AM)

    Really time knows where and why of us. Lovely but with sad undercurrent. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 628 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (3/13/2013 3:21:00 AM)

    As you say only Time Knows! An excellent philosophical poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,735 Points Ramesh Rai (3/12/2013 7:57:00 AM)

    I can never say good bye. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Colin Bradley (3/12/2013 3:05:00 AM)

    Beautifull poem Soul outstanding (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Www.poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 Search 2 (3/9/2013 7:10:00 AM)

    Time knows it and then Unwritten Soul knows a half of it.....
    The use of imagination has never been so philosophically well depended in your poems dear Soul. It is a very fine poem that makes one sit back and think though I think God knows not so much as Unwritten Soul knows... (Report) Reply










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