Only Two Options, Fear Or ____, You Choose...? Poem by Chuy Amante

Only Two Options, Fear Or ____, You Choose...?

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Foundational blocks we only have two, count it.

One is dense mass, the other is Spirit.

Which platform do you prefer to operate from?

They have names, both are 4-letter words.

Have 4-letter words always scared you?

Let's start with the concrete,
a solid foundation, can't be beat?
Its name is odd, it may sound queer,
this big, heavy block is called
FEAR!

Build your house and life upon this,
you'll be safe and sound, but not much bliss.

If that is fine, please don't go further,
what's next will ruin all, your old life murder.

Block number 2

Life's Greatest Mystery?

Go ahead write your story and your plan,
Live like a God or just a man.

Friday, March 28, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: fear
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 08 April 2014

A very thought provoking write, fear is the biggest obstacle we have to overcome it or it can eat us up and spit us out, life is to enjoy and embrace the good things in this world! !

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Haytham Mansour 06 April 2014

The symbolism in this poem is mind-boggling! I've reached a different end each time I read this poem. Respect!

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Neela Nath Das 06 April 2014

Universe, I adore your write because, it tells the hackneyed tale with a touch different than others.I have to learn this art of writing.Kudos!

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