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Goodnews mememugh Karibo

Ontop this heart

Its mad here, the skies portray rotten debris.

an awkward assembly; very sour to the chastity in magdalene- - a heart is drifting away from the reach of normalcy.

Ontop this child heart, a pebble's liquifying. Tell it to the rants of the night,
the soulful still that pampers the dark nights.

O, in flames of self, i'm raging- a piece of mourning solo's rocking,
alas! look a man's muscle melting in the rain.

In the throngs of my voice, a flesh stucks of boiling silence.

Ontop this baby heart, i sit biting misplaced memories; to this day even, i still wrestle with
ghost emotions.

I exist as a man by name, the winds have flown to the ribs of the dale with my masculinity.

Prone, i see my heart, ajar to pricking pinches, embittered than crude vinegar.

Ontop this heart
decaying sighs inhabit.

Its mad here, the skies portray rotten debris.

Submitted: Wednesday, January 01, 2014
Edited: Sunday, January 12, 2014

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