Oops Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Oops

Rating: 5.0


What a blunder I have committed,
Some are laughing at me,
Making fun of me,
And enjoying my act,
Of a foolish misdeed,
Go to hell my greed,
I hate you devil,
You are nothing but evil,
For the sake of fame,
I earned a bad name,
I painted a nude,
And that too of myself,
I made it public,
And now I regret,
What constrained me to,
Write poems on my past!

(Being inspired by a quotation of Paulo Coelho published at PH.
"Writing is a socially acceptable form of getting naked in public")

Tuesday, December 9, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: regret
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It's just a poetry I don't regret at all.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 09 December 2014

Very nicely expressed dismay at one's own mistake at writing poetry and being naked in public.......very well composed on a unique concept......10/10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 09 December 2014

Very nicely expressed dismay at one's own mistake at writing poetry and being naked in public.......very well composed on a unique concept......10/10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 09 December 2014

Very nicely expressed dismay at one's own mistake at writing poetry and being naked in public.......very well composed on a unique concept......10/10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 09 December 2014

Very nicely expressed dismay at one's own mistake at writing poetry and being naked in public.......very well composed on a unique concept......10/10

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Amitava Sur 09 December 2014

lovely poem, analyzing and criticising oneself. It is a self refining process which deserves all credits by any person who does this.

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Savita Tyagi 13 December 2014

Very interesting poem. We all have a need to share our joys as well as our regrets. Writing is becoming a way mostly because of ease of new technological ways. At the same time it has made our life style more aloof too. Human nature finds expressions with whatever tools available. Enjoyed your way of expressing!

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Valsa George 13 December 2014

It is never a blunder to expose yourself through your writings and you yourself do not consider it a blunder! That's why you engage in making yourself 'nude' over and over again! Quite interesting!

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Khalida Bano Ali 10 December 2014

Writing is a socially acceptable form of getting naked in public A nice write on a nice quotation.

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Sarmad Mirza 10 December 2014

lovely poem nicely expressed self mistakes nice thinking as well

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Sarmad Mirza 10 December 2014

lovely poem nicely expressed self mistakes nice thinking as well

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