Oozing Thoughts Poem by ramesh rai

Oozing Thoughts

Rating: 5.0


I like to express my oozing Thoughts
When my all emotions are spilling
And drifting my porous heart
Where humanity is evaluated
With degrading nature of love.

I like to express as to how
To celebrate the vigilance awareness day
Where every corner of life
Is rotten with bigotry thoughts.

Do we ever think of
More hazardous and infectious ail
Going to kill the entire society
Why not living seven seas afar.

Do we think ever
Of our coming generation
When flame of corruption
Will burn them all.

The humanity is self shaken
With this great enemy
To defy the truth
And accept the challenge
To establish a corruption free society.

O dear friend
Let's think once more again and
Pledge on the day of vigilance awareness
To be vigilant at every step of life
When the flame of corruption is extinguished
With moral thoughts of our lives.

May be or may not be
We can change the whole
But we can change our surroundings
So let's pledge and march forward
To establish a neat and clean human society.

Thursday, November 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: corruption
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 06 February 2017

At least we start things at home, then neighborhood...it look small to cover but its enough right.. yes i think so

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Geetha Jayakumar 25 December 2016

Very well said; So let's pledge and march forward To establish a neat and clean human society. Yes, we can change our surroundings. Beautiful write.

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Unwritten Soul 07 November 2016

You know its hard to think about it when we can really see what is coming in...the bad side of the world, i cant pretend that everything is fine when i know it is not...but that world we are living in now. I think as good replicating, bad will also may propagating...we never stop the bad from multiplying from generation to other generation because its everywhere and we dont know when and where it will spark...but if we can do surpress the expansion of its growth by promoting more love, nurture people about real value of life...and of course if each of us can play a role to make world better, we can make a great change.... :)

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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 November 2016

A wonderful pledge which is a timely demand. Thanks for sharing this profound and thought provoking verse.10 points. Regards.

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