Open Page Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Open Page

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We inscribed on page
Freed lion from cage
Many may be burning with rage
Escape from it called freedom from bondage

We can represent to world our own version
To walk with new and get familiar with conversion
May not be out rightly rejected or with negation
Old thoughts woven with new transformation

Strong will power to reach the shore
Emerging strong and ill will bore
To shun the violence with peaceful message
Carving out path with smooth passage

In our own sphere we grow,
Hard work and dream for bright tomorrow
Success grants us fame and fine glow
We can surely then whistle the blow

It is glorious moment
What we attempt is beginning or movement
It may yield or may not
Certainly we win as battle is fought

We may excel in every field
Never surrender or yield
Try to pick the scattered thread
Always provide guidance and lead

I may earn acclaim but loose the battle
Life may be in jeopardy and not settle
What do I try for and make the gain?
Whole world at feet but I lay simply slained

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 August 2010

We inscribed on page Freed lion from cage

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Kamlesh Ambalal 05 July 2010

We inscribed on page Freed lion from cage Many may be burning with rage Escape from it called freedom from bondage.. we are master of our destiny.. nicely composed....10

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Pitilosi Mdala 09 November 2009

open page is an eye opener to people who do not know the reality of life

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 November 2009

Acceptance of defeat is loosing the battle. Many battles will come and go, in win or defeat I’ll be in my own glowing go. Ten++ niv Please grace with your comments to my posts [new too] niv PS: On Pin Board: ‘Learn To Hate Defeat.’ LOL!

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 06 November 2009

dear poet this one is well written and constructed.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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