Open The Door Poem by mohammad ahmadizadeh

Open The Door

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Open the curtains
Turn off the lights
Let the morning sunlight
Shines the room

Let your weak hands clear
Your dirty breathe steam of the cold windows

Look at the dawn's long hairs
Look at the long hair girls
Dancing with the wind

Open the window
Listen to the wind song

Open the door
Let the girls of sun come inside
To weave the messy hairs of your hope
Let the wind play the dancing music
Moving the numb legs of your thoughts

Saturday, December 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 11 January 2016

Music and dance! Love and peace. Nice work. Thanks for sharing.

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Roseann Shawiak 10 January 2016

Beautiful and enlightening, invigorating the mind with hope! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Fatemeh Tarkashvand 27 December 2015

So beautiful. Besyar ziba

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Mohammad Ahmadizadeh 27 December 2015

I appreciate your words. Khyeli memnun Fatemeh' ye aziz.

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Fatemeh Tarkashvand 27 December 2015

Besyar Ziba. So beautiful

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Mohammad Ahmadizadeh 27 December 2015

Memnun duste gerami. Paydar bashid. Many thanks

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