: : : Open Wrists: : : Poem by Kieran J1996
: : : Open Wrists: : :
As I opened my wrists,
The pain was sweet,
A reminder of life,
Of which is true,
Pain never lies,
Never twists life,
It is merely an obstacle,
That stands before the End,
It is that which brings comfort,
The final wait,
Before the final sleep,
I just happened upon this poem and I'm glad I did. It's breathtaking and very deep. I like that you kept the length rather short because that way it didn't detract from the meaning. I love it.
Oh my.... i love this. I love it so much. I can't say I completely agree with it, but I love it! Great job Kieran!
this is probably my favourite so far. its very well written and very deep(:
this is exactly right. and i would know. and you summed it up perfectly with only a few wordz! amazing. as usual.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 5:36:12 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I really like this poem. =]