Open Your Eyes And You Will See Poem by Cameron Sullivan

Open Your Eyes And You Will See

Rating: 4.8


Todays world may never know
The beauty it once was.

Whatever path that we may take,
We may leave it crumbled in dust.

Whenever you look and see the horrid place
That man themselves have gone to make.

Only then will you ever see
The beauty that our home used to be.

I ask you to stop and take some time,
To think of our creations.

To see what our home has become,
Thanks to all of our nations.

We all play a part in some small way,
Living always day to day.

We are stuck in an endless cycle,
Always running the same few miles.

Open your eyes and you will see,
The home our home only used to be.

Thursday, November 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: future,home,life,past
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 07 January 2016

We are stuck in an endless cycle, Always running the same few miles. think of the creation the beauty it was...... so many thoughts about life and living. thank you. tony

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Cameron Sullivan 17 February 2016

It's always been something that I have had a mind about. Watching people run in place as they walk the same familiar path of their every day life. So I decidedto put it in my own words. Thank you for the comment Dr. Tony

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Joe Davis 20 November 2015

Hi Cameron-This is my kind of poem, I really enjoyed it! A 9 from me.

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Cameron Sullivan 20 November 2015

Thank you! ! Kinda new to the whole poem thing, so I'm doing my best to write good ones!

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