Opportunity Poem by DarkX 474

Opportunity

Rating: 5.0


Shining stars
up in the sky
makes me feel satisfy
knowing that there is opportunities

Opening up ourselves
to the outside world
one step at a time
pieces by pieces
will solve the puzzle

Take a chance
to a better life
there are billion, or trillions
of stars out there
waiting for you

so reach, reach, and
reach for an opportunity
beyond the stars.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 10 May 2011

I love the way you wrote the poem. Deep and wise with Great imagery. Excellent write. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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DarkX 474

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Carrollton, GA, USA
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