Sally Plumb Plumb

Freshman - 514 Points (23 9 1940 / Haverhill Suffolk England)

Orange


I offer you
an orange,
a globe of sun,
to sustain you
through the noonday heat.

Savour its perfume
and eat its flesh
given to you in innocence
representing my love.

Submitted: Tuesday, June 01, 2010
Edited: Wednesday, July 06, 2011

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  • Rookie - 299 Points Adeline Foster (7/5/2011 12:52:00 PM)

    Sally
    This is lovely. You’ve captured a moment’s blossoming. Try - Marble Moments
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Dale Mullock (7/20/2010 2:40:00 PM)

    Hi Sally,

    Such a wonderful and simple gesture taken in and absorbed by whomever you love... the sustenance for the day, to hold it up to the sky and know that the warmth in your heart shadows that of the heat of the sun. Loving the whole orange theme, from the fragrance to the sticky sweet texture to the flavour. Nice expressed and written.

    Dale :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 86 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (6/12/2010 1:27:00 AM)

    Exclusive metaphors romantically chiseled....’psycho-somatic-succulent-safari ‘
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points nomad omnia (6/5/2010 2:16:00 AM)

    This is like a close-up on a moment, on a gesture. multi-dimensional in its simplicity. Love it! N (Report) Reply

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