Orchad Of Love Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN
Orchad Of Love
My love will follow you like your shadow,
Until you stop swaying throu' the orchad
Of my chaste love without saying anything
Where you will feel my rubious heart;
As the blossoming of cherries
Where you will see my innocent smile;
As the elated petals of lillies
O my love, breathe in my redolent dreams,
O my love, wander in my celestial love,
Thirsting the elixir of my lonely heart.
Until my nectarell petals wither out
So deep it can be nothing else but, real true love. An amazing poem my friend.
so pure, so sweet, so simple and expressive, words chosen in this piece of beauty are living and lively besides they could say with ultimate confidence; here we are, here the beauty of being so pure and being so true and honest, come on, readers, come on bearing in mind that vipins is vip.in love and poetry, so greet him with your hearts and souls, , , all hearts with your pure heart, , , my brother AHMED KHALED
where you will see, the elated petals of lillies like my innocent smile..... Wow! sahodhara, this is a superb poem, excellent..top marks! ! !
Siya smiles a lot and Ahmed enjoy with vip.in love hahaa...it so beautiful writing Vipins, it's like a orchard of rare orchids..you play word softly like the petals on your lips to keep them spoken vibrantly but gently..Nice and it awesome..high marks for u my friend :)
Cheers! With your stellar expression you produced remarkable influence on with expressions like these. Great Metaphors run all over your poem.100/100 with remark Awesome! the blossoming of cherries like my rubious heart
imagery is made with a grammar of love...beautiful adjectives + nouns: chaste love, rubious heart, elated petals of lillies, innocent smile, redolent dreams, celestial love...many poets do it but keats poems reflect this feature mostly...beautiful poem
Your poem's are as beautiful to read as to sit in a beautiful peaceful garden in the shade. I love the lines. Truly an amazing poem!
its great :) i like the comparison in the two. its amazing. really :)
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4/25/2024 6:48:42 PM # 1.0.0.1119
thirsting the elixir of my heart. How deep it is! eternal love by having the elixir of heart! dear poet, it is awesome creation. loved it a lotttttt! keep it up!